Comments on: Chivalry

By: ^_^ Lillian ^_^

^_^ Lillian ^_^ — Sun, 26 Oct 2008 22:05:00 +0000

Rather morbid, I think… He’s dea’d, correct?

By: Alanna

Alanna — Sun, 12 Oct 2008 22:12:00 +0000

I like this very much!

By: John R. Ahern

John R. Ahern — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 21:38:00 +0000

As I said, I’m still unconvinced by certain parts of it. But, actually, reading it through this time, the beginning images made more sense if the knight were actually bitter, what with that cold “pray yours continue” so inconsistent with the rest of the tone as a sarcastic dying curse.

By: Corinth

Corinth — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 18:43:00 +0000

I… am still studiously not grimacing. :P

But I must say, it takes some kind of genius to write a poem like that. :-D

By: Philip Hilton

Philip Hilton — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 08:01:00 +0000

I like it. Very much. Although I think that you should change your name to “nick embrey”, a la e.e.cummings.

By: L. C. Russell

L. C. Russell — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 01:44:00 +0000

*very long pause*

I am at a loss for words. Which is quite unusual, might I add. XD

By: Han

Han — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 00:09:00 +0000

“I am of the day and I die with the sun”

do like, Nick.